Character Analysis

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Introductory Paragraph
*No attention-getting device *No mention of author or title *Does not use transitions *Makes references to "this essay" but does not include story background *Uses a clear thesis statement
*No attention-getting device *Mentions title or author *Uses appropriate story background *Transition to thesis statement *Clear thesis statement identifying traits
*Uses an attention-getting device *Mentions author and work *Includes appropriate story background *Transition to thesis statement *Clear thesis statement identifying traits
*Appropriate attention-getting device *Good transition to author and work including appropriate story background by weaving it into paragraph *Clear transition to thesis statement *Thesis statement identifies traits and position
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Body Paragraphs
*Attempted three body paragraphs *No topic sentence in one or more paragraphs *No transition to support *Inadequate support *Inadequate elaboration *Weak and/or off-topic sentences
*One paragraph per trait *Topic sentence in each paragraph *Attempts transition to support *Adequate support without citations *Insufficient elaboration *Does not use strong sentences
*At least one paragraph per trait *Uses clear topic in each paragraph *Uses transitions to support *Adequate support with correct citations *Sufficient text-based elaboration *Uses strong sentences
*At least one paragraph for each trait *Uses clear topic sentence in each paragraph with a variety of placements. *Uses strong transitions to support *Incorporates sufficient quotations with correct citations. *Provides abundant text-based elaboration *Uses strong sentences.
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Conclusion
*Does not provide a link to the introduction *Does not include summary *Attempts a final insight
*Attempts to link to the introduction/attention-getting device *Reviews character traits as a summary of the essay *Attempts a final insight
*Links to introduction/ attention-getting device *Reviews character traits as a summary of the essay *Creates a final insight
*Links to introduction/ attention-getting device *Reviews character traits as a summary of the essay *Creates final insight based upon original thought
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Conventions
More than six GUM errors.
Five to six GUM errors.
Three to four GUM errors.
No more than two GUM errors.
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