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Introductory Paragraph
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*No attention-getting device
*No mention of author or title
*Does not use transitions
*Makes references to "this essay" but does not include story background
*Uses a clear thesis statement
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*No attention-getting device
*Mentions title or author
*Uses appropriate story background
*Transition to thesis statement
*Clear thesis statement identifying traits
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*Uses an attention-getting device
*Mentions author and work
*Includes appropriate story background
*Transition to thesis statement
*Clear thesis statement identifying traits
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*Appropriate attention-getting device
*Good transition to author and work including appropriate story background by weaving it into paragraph
*Clear transition to thesis statement
*Thesis statement identifies traits and position
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Body Paragraphs
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*Attempted three body paragraphs
*No topic sentence in one or more paragraphs
*No transition to support
*Inadequate support
*Inadequate elaboration
*Weak and/or off-topic sentences
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*One paragraph per trait
*Topic sentence in each paragraph
*Attempts transition to support
*Adequate support without citations
*Insufficient elaboration
*Does not use strong sentences
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*At least one paragraph per trait
*Uses clear topic in each paragraph
*Uses transitions to support
*Adequate support with correct citations
*Sufficient text-based elaboration
*Uses strong sentences
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*At least one paragraph for each trait
*Uses clear topic sentence in each paragraph with a variety of placements.
*Uses strong transitions to support
*Incorporates sufficient quotations with correct citations.
*Provides abundant text-based elaboration
*Uses strong sentences.
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Conclusion
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*Does not provide a link to the introduction
*Does not include summary
*Attempts a final insight
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*Attempts to link to the introduction/attention-getting device
*Reviews character traits as a summary of the essay
*Attempts a final insight
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*Links to introduction/
attention-getting device
*Reviews character traits as a summary of the essay
*Creates a final insight
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*Links to introduction/ attention-getting device
*Reviews character traits as a summary of the essay
*Creates final insight based upon original thought
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Conventions
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More than six GUM errors.
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Five to six GUM errors.
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Three to four GUM errors.
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No more than two GUM errors.
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