Personal Weight Lifting Essay
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Date : ___________________ Title of Work: ___________________
 
Criteria
Points
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Focus and Detail
The topic and main ideas are not clear.
There is one topic. Main ideas are somewhat clear.
There is one clear, well focused topic. Main ideas are clear but are not well supported by detailed information.
There is one clear, well focused topic. Main ideas are clear and are well supported by detailed and accurate information.
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Organization
There is no clear introduction, structure, or conclusion.
The introduction states the main topic. A conclusion is included.
The introduction states the main topic and provides an overview of the paper. A conclusion is included.
The introduction is inviting, states the main topic, and provides an overview of the paper. Information is relevant and presented in a logical order. The conclusion is strong.
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Word Choice
The writer uses a limited vocabulary. Jargon or clichés may be present and detract from the meaning.
The author uses words that communicate clearly, but the writing lacks variety.
The author uses vivid words and phrases. The choice and placement of words is inaccurate at times and/or seems overdone.
The author uses vivid words and phrases. The choice and placement of words seems accurate, natural, and not forced.
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Sentence Structure, Grammar, Mechanics, and Spelling
Sentences sound awkward, are distractingly repetitive, or are difficult to understand. The author makes numerous errors in grammar, mechanics, and/or spelling that interfere with understanding.
Most sentences are well constructed, but they have a similar structure and/or length. The author makes several errors in grammar, mechanics, and/or spelling that interfere with understanding.
Most sentences are well constructed and have varied structure and length. The author makes a few errors in grammar, mechanics, and/or spelling, but they do not interfere with understanding.
All sentences are well constructed and have varied structure and length. The author makes no errors in grammar, mechanics, and/or spelling.
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