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Theme
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Adaptation keeps none
of the themes from the original piece. Events, characters,
and dialog appear to have nothing to do with the original
piece.
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Some elements from
the original piece are present in the adaptation, but
it is hard to see how the ideas from the original piece
are related.
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There are clear parallels
between the adaptation and the original piece. The adaptation
keeps true to the overarching theme and situations of
the original piece.
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The adaptation shows
a remarkable ability to keep multiple themes from the
original piece intact. Subtle moments from the original
piece are present, and well integrated into the adaptation.
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Voice/Originality
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Dialog is robotic and
unnatural. No clear voice is present in the written
piece. It's unclear who wrote this.
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Some elements of voice
are emerging, but many parts of the adaptation are unoriginal.
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A clear voice is present
throughout. The adaptation is original and interesting.
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The adaptation is completely
unique. A strong voice is present throughout. The adaptation
could only have been written by you.
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Clarity/Fluency
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The and presentation
and adaptation are very disjointed and confusing. The
dialog flows poorly and makes the piece difficult to
understand. Actors in the scene are also difficult to
hear/understand.
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Dialog has some problems
with flow, but is understandable. There are some unnecessary
pauses or stops. It is sometimes hard to hear the actors.
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Dialog flows smoothly
and is easy to understand. Actors speak loudly and clearly.
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Every aspect of the
adaptation and performance flows very smoothly. The
actors are always easy to hear and understand.
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Professionalism/Commitment
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Group is not dressed
appropriately for their presentation. Group members
constantly laugh/giggle or look bored and do not seem
to take the project seriously.
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Group members appear
to be somewhat appropriately dressed for the presentation.
Group members are at least making an effort to take
the project seriously.
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Group members are dressed
appropriately for for the presentation. Group members
are committed to the presentation throughout.
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Group members are very
appropriately dressed and have made some costume choices
for their scene. Group members are committed throughout
the presentation and are able to avoid any distractions
during it.
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Performance
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Actors read their lines
straight off of their script, rarely looking up at the
audience. Actors stand still nearly the entire duration
of their performance. Little to no attempt is made to
embody the characters.
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Actors mostly read
off their script, but sometimes look up and say lines
to the audience. There was an attempt at blocking (movement)
made.
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Actors have occasionally
glance at their script, but say most of their lines
to the audience. Very clear blocking choices have been
made.
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Actors may have scripts
in-hand, but are rarely needed, all lines said to the
audience. Blocking is dynamic and fits the scene very
well. The actors have engaged the audience.
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